the bringing-down of day
Upon the bridge, light and liquid seem to mingle glassily.
If I smoked, I’d light one up to add something to the ambience. Nothing like a framed scene imbued with cliches.
It is not uncommon for a very simple, crude rhyme to enter my head in such moments; When the air is almost cold, almost warm, and the melody of a sax busker carries on the breeze to lend meaning to a couple kissing in the distance…
Still set your sights on mountain-tops,
On distant, star-washed lands?
It is not, ’tis not for you -
Without, the night has hurried in,
And huddles by your hand.
Stir once more upon your seat;
Sigh again and stand;
Unmake your woes as like to when
The tide unmakes the journey
Of surging, shore-bound sands.
Live them out, these twilight hours
Of closing words,
Of thoughts and failing light:
Unmake the bringing-down of day
To a starry, long-sought night.
Enjambement! Classy.
beautiful imagery. Anything that evokes the sea has all my heart. ! More please xx